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The Vanishing Hour Chapter 9

Written by: Aidan | Published on: 09 October, 2024

The shadows recoiled from the door, as if hesitant to take Margret completely. But Margret stood her ground, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath visible in the chilling air. The whispers surrounded her, no longer faint but loud and clear, almost overwhelming in their demand.

"Margret... stay..."

Behind her, Daniel, his face pale, struggled to stand. "No, Margret!" His voice cracked with desperation. "Come back! You can't do this!"

But Margret didn’t move. She could feel the weight of the town’s ancient curse bearing down on her, demanding her sacrifice, demanding her surrender. The truth of Black Hollow, the very reason no one ever left, was wrapped around her like chains.

And yet, something deep within her refused to accept this fate.

“This isn’t over yet,” she muttered, her eyes narrowing as she faced the shadows. She looked back at Daniel, her voice steady but filled with sorrow. “One of us has to stay, Daniel. But maybe… maybe there’s another way.”

The figures outside the inn flickered, as though uncertain. Margret felt it in the air—the momentary hesitation. They didn’t know her mind. Not yet. She still had a choice. If she could play their game right, perhaps she could buy more time.

She stepped forward, out of the inn, into the street. The shadows pressed in around her, their cold tendrils brushing against her skin, their whispers curling around her mind. "You will not leave..."

The journal in her hand felt heavier, its words an anchor. There had to be something—some forgotten detail she missed. Something that could change everything. With shaking hands, she flipped to the final page, eyes scanning the cryptic text.

There. One sentence stood out, written in frantic scrawl:

"The Vanishing Hour can be broken… but only if the town accepts your bargain."

A bargain.

Margret’s mind raced. What did the town want? What did it want?

Slowly, she closed the journal and turned toward the center of the street, where the shadows now formed a swirling mass, dark and impenetrable. “You want me,” she said aloud, her voice cutting through the air. “You need someone to stay. But you don’t care who, do you?”

The shadows shifted, their whispers growing louder, as if they sensed her plan.

“If I stay, Daniel goes free,” Margret continued, her voice hardening. “That’s the bargain.”

Daniel struggled to his feet, his body trembling with the effort. “No! Margret, don’t do this!” He staggered toward her, but the shadows blocked his path, holding him back with an invisible force.

Margret ignored his pleas, her focus entirely on the entity now. “You’ve taken so many before us, haven’t you? And you’ll keep taking more unless we stop this.”

The shadows seemed to pulse, growing darker, heavier. The town itself was reacting. Black Hollow’s secrets were alive, connected to the very essence of the Vanishing Hour. Margret felt the weight of countless souls trapped in its grip, lost to time, never able to escape.

But she wasn’t like them.

“What if…” she whispered, a new thought crossing her mind. “What if I gave you something more?”

The air thickened, and the whispering stopped. The town was listening.

Margret took a deep breath, her gaze steady. “Let us leave. But I’ll give you something you’ve never had before.”

The shadows surged, curious but cautious. Margret could feel the entity’s confusion, its ancient hunger wavering. She had its attention now, and she had to make this count.

“I’ll give you me,” she said, her voice resolute. “Not as your prisoner. Not as your sacrifice. I’ll give you my life, willingly, if you let Daniel go and never take another soul again.”

Daniel’s eyes widened in horror. “No! You can’t do this, Margret! You can’t trust them!”

The shadows swirled violently around her, their presence suffocating, but Margret stood firm. “I’m not trusting them, Daniel,” she said quietly, turning to face him. “I’m making sure they’ll never have anyone else. If the town accepts a willing life, then the curse can be broken.”

Daniel stumbled forward, reaching out for her, but the shadows held him in place. “There has to be another way!”

“There isn’t,” Margret said softly, her voice breaking. “I’m sorry.”

Tears filled Daniel’s eyes as he struggled to reach her. “Please, Margret… don’t do this.”

But Margret knew, deep down, that this was the only way. The town had never been offered a willing soul before. The journal had said so. The curse was fueled by fear, by resistance. If she could end it here, no one else would have to suffer.

She took a step closer to the swirling mass of darkness, her heart pounding. “Do we have a deal?”

The shadows seemed to still, the cold air around her pausing in anticipation. For a moment, all was silent.

And then, a voice—not a whisper, but a clear, deep voice—emerged from the center of the shadows.

“Accepted.”

The word hung in the air, final and binding. The entity had agreed. Margret felt the weight of the town lift slightly, as though the curse itself was loosening its grip on her.

But before she could breathe a sigh of relief, the shadows surged forward, engulfing her completely. Cold seeped into her bones, and the world around her dissolved into darkness. She couldn’t see, couldn’t move. The Vanishing Hour had claimed her.

Daniel screamed her name, his voice echoing through the empty streets, but Margret could no longer hear him.